I love how clean the Hellobee header looks, but it does feel a little bit lonely without a tagline. Our creative director Minhee came up with these tag line options awhile back, but we haven’t gotten around to putting them up on the site yet. At first I wanted to incorporate something with a watercolor wash to tie in with our watercolor author characters, but now I’m leaning towards a cute little label with a pin. We’d love to hear what you think!
Option 1:
Option 3:
Option 4:
Option 5:
Option 6:
Option 7:
Option 8:
Which option do you like best?
GOLD / pomelo / 5167 posts
I like option 2. Let me explain why
# 1 – The fact that it highlights the word baby is nice, seeing this is the main focus of the site
#2 – I like the honeycomb element but think # 3,4 and 5 don’t work as well. No. 5 being too busy (in my mind)
#3 – I think the shape of the “frame” in 6 and 7 has been used one too many times ( as a designer)
# 4 I like the idea of a pin but at the same time I think having a box around the text makes it heavy looking. And the last option feels like it’s lacking.
I like that theres a little color in the tagline so #2 is my choice.
looking forward to what others say.
Clearly this is my opinion as a designer
coffee bean / 44 posts
Option 1 is super cute!
grape / 84 posts
Option 1 is my favorite followed by Option 4. They’re all super cute & I love the tagline!
GOLD / pomelo / 5167 posts
That being said, if you chose 2, 3 or 4 I’d be happy
apple seed / 3 posts
option 1
apricot / 460 posts
i like option 6
honeydew / 7968 posts
i like option 1, but i do like the pentagon over the “baby” in #2 and #4. can we incorporate #2 or #4 to #1?
cherry / 153 posts
I like option 4 best, for sure.
grapefruit / 4800 posts
I like 4, 5, 6 best.
hostess / eggplant / 11068 posts
1 or 4!
GOLD / wonderful coffee bean / 18478 posts
I vote for #1!
grapefruit / 4400 posts
I love option #1!
hostess / wonderful persimmon / 25556 posts
I like #1. I like the pin idea because it reminds me of old school cloth baby diapers that used pins. I like #1 better than #6 and #7 because of the direction of the pin and the slightly off-kilter box Say Hello to Baby is in. If you’re leaning towards using the other design, I think #4 is most pleasing to the eye. My eye, at least.
olive / 52 posts
I like 4.
pea / 20 posts
Option 1
persimmon / 1255 posts
Option #1, but mirror-imaged so that the paper is tilted the other way and the pin is pinned from the right instead of left.
apricot / 302 posts
I like Option 4 best!
pea / 6 posts
oh it’s been awhile since i looked at these! have to say i agree w/blushink- #5 is too busy. i think i prefer #1… bee- just had a last minute thought… what about a clothes pin? like the ones used on diapers long time ago?
pineapple / 12802 posts
I like 4
hostess / papaya / 10540 posts
#5 & #7 are my favorites. I also keep going back to #1. Really I don’t think you can go wrong with any of the choices.
bananas / 9357 posts
I like options 2 & 4 with 4 being my favorite for the same reasons that Blushink highlighted. I also feel that those flow better with the hellobee. The ones with a pin are cute, but I feel like they draw your eye away from hellobee {when that should be the main focus}.
kiwi / 575 posts
I like option 1.
cherry / 168 posts
1 & 4 are my faves!
blogger / wonderful cherry / 21628 posts
I really like option 1
pear / 1554 posts
I like option 4
GOLD / wonderful apricot / 22646 posts
number four!
pea / 20 posts
I think 2 is my favorite, followed by 1.
pear / 1769 posts
8
GOLD / apricot / 337 posts
I prefer Option 1. It doesn’t distract from the header, but adds!
cherry / 111 posts
I like #4.
persimmon / 1379 posts
I like #1.
The honeycomb is cute once I think about it, but it looks a little “powerpoint template” to me…
grapefruit / 4049 posts
#1 is adorable!
second choice would be #2. i like how baby is in the honeycomb image.
pea / 9 posts
2, 4, 1, then 7 =)
coffee bean / 40 posts
I like #8 and #4 best, with #2 coming in close behind that. They are all nice, though!
pea / 10 posts
Option 1.
cherry / 116 posts
option 1!
pear / 1852 posts
While I like the honeycombs, I like 1, 6 and 7 best, I’d go with 1, because I love how it’s tilted to the side. It reminds me that we can try to be as organized as we possibly can be as moms, but nothing is ever perfect!
coffee bean / 46 posts
My faves are 1, 7, 4.
pea / 17 posts
1 with the pin from from 7 exactly the way it is.
pea / 15 posts
#1 is my fave.
pomelo / 5628 posts
1 & 6
pomegranate / 3045 posts
Option 4! I really like that it gives a bit of color, and it seems more dynamic than most of the other options. Plus, I do like that it highlights ‘baby.’
wonderful pomelo / 30692 posts
1, 5, and 7 are my favorites!
pomegranate / 3032 posts
4, 5 then 1
pomegranate / 3053 posts
4
apricot / 260 posts
#1 and 4
squash / 13199 posts
Option 1 is the clear winner for me!
GOLD / pomelo / 5167 posts
@Mrs.Hulahoop I thought about the vintage diaper pin. I think it would work
kiwi / 537 posts
Option #1, but can you use the style of a diaper pin rather than a hat pin?
pea / 19 posts
7 and 8
cherry / 128 posts
#1!
pea / 11 posts
#1
kiwi / 623 posts
I like #1!
pineapple / 12793 posts
I like 4! I think the pins remind me of poking the baby…eek!
I love the idea of a vintage safety pin.
cantaloupe / 6669 posts
I like #2! I like how it highlights BABY and has the honeycomb theme
pea / 8 posts
I like #1 the best. It’s stylish and simple. #4 is cute too, as it ties in the bee theme, but I don’t think it’s immediately obvious that it’s a honeycomb (it is a honeycomb, isn’t it?) which makes it just seem like a pattern. I would also like this one though if it were a bit more “beeish”.
cherry / 130 posts
I like #1 the best.
nectarine / 2180 posts
#1 or #2
cherry / 175 posts
#1 for sure! Clean, simple, cute!!! I love the slight tilt and feel it’s perfectly highlighted without taking away from the header.
kiwi / 718 posts
I like option 6 best, but with the pin reversed, the way it is in option 1 – super cute options
blogger / pomegranate / 3201 posts
I like #5 or #8 the best. Cute tagline!
apricot / 441 posts
I’m a big fan of option 1!
apple seed / 1 posts
Option #1 is my fave.
pear / 1650 posts
Option 4 with the honeycomb !
cherry / 151 posts
I like #4.
I also like #1, but I agree that a vintage baby pin would be better. (I almost want to say I’d like to see #4 inserted into #1, but I’m really not too sure about that)
GOLD / pomelo / 5167 posts
Love the one you chose! looks great and balances out the title quite nicely!